I was impressed with some of the opinions given by the children on the journal topic, "Should Crocodile Have Blown The Bubble?"
Here are some comments (unedited; in their own words, spelling errors and all) which I thought were rather clever and interesting! =)
*I obtained permission from the selected pupils to publish their works! (so no copyrights issues hee~)
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
No, crocodile should not have blown bubbles. Because it was annoying other animals. By blowing bubbles it blew away parrot’s feathers and monkey’s hair.
Parrot must have felt relly embarrassed because it had no feathers. It probably felt angry too as it could not fly any more.
As for monkey, it was irritated because crocodile was told not to blow bubbles. Yet crocodile kept on blowing bubbles.
It was a crazy ending with crocodile having its mouth tied up by monkey. I find this to be an intresting and silly story.
- Ethan
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
No because crocodile could have destory the forest. If the forest is destoryed, the animals in the forest were have no place to live. They were also have no food to eat and they will die. If I am the crocodile I will listen to monkey advise.
- Zhi Xin
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
No. The crocodile should not blow the bubble because it would dirty the forest. Also, it would disturb the animals and would destroy the environment.
- Ryan
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Crocodile should not have blown the bubble, because it could have caused the trees to get sticky and the hunters will get stuck to the trees.
Besides the hunters, small animals could get stuck to the trees too.
- Nicole
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~





No comments:
Post a Comment